Kristen H.

Feb 15, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoet Weekly 02/11/24 to 02/17/24

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Grapefruit and Sugar

For all the love I have
Of the sand and sea
The rays of the sun
The rain and the mountains...

For all the love I have
Of yellow flowers
Grapefruit and sugar
The smiles of strangers...

For all the love I have
Of snow and hot showers
Music and sweet coffee
Driving at night...

I love you
Most of all

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman , Misha Collins, John Donne

1 year 4 months ago

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1 year 4 months ago

this is a really good love poem.

*hugs, Cat

1 year 4 months ago

So much, Cat!

1 year 4 months ago

Hello, Kristen,
Wonderful title. The entire poem is simple and sincere. Lovely.
Thank you!
L

1 year 4 months ago

Very much, Lavender! I appreciate it!

1 year 4 months ago

..with Lavender. The title was the eye catcher for me and the expression is as sweet as...sugar on a grapefruit!

Thomas

1 year 4 months ago

So much, Thomas! I'm happy to hear my title is an eye catcher!