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Nov 22, 2010
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green eyes! still unseen......
what fool must he be
to ignore lovely eyes
as yours
you have four boys
and
a girl
keep your family intact
each one is a pearl
including him
for whom your poem
now you unfurl
hope he does awake
from the slumber
in which he basks
and
its high time that
now he unmasks
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
loved
14 years 7 months ago
my perpetual
thanks for ur everlasting support
loved
14 years 7 months ago
thanks
removed the excess weight
t thanx