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Mar 17, 2025
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A Green Morning
Happy, the leprechaun,
appeared on
St.Patty's morn.
Traipsing to
and hopping fro,
Happy did a jig and sang it
so that all knew
he was celebrating
the saint
that led so many
to the church.
Forsaking his younger
days of enslavement by
pirates in Ireland
Patrick returned to
teach of the Father
and the Son.
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