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Feb 10, 2011
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Greenhouse Effect
To me
You are
The heating sun,
Giver of life,
Shower of warmth.
I am
To you
The iceberg
Melting.
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dennis Go
14 years 4 months ago
Thanks Amal
I'm glad you liked this one. I've been trying hard to come up with short, concise pieces.