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Apr 20, 2021
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Advancing the soul,
metaphysical orc, promote
original thinking,
experience all, I need sleep.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCgZCmCJJoCVwq2M3GH8VzLQ
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Candlewitch
4 years 3 months ago
A Question?
what is an orc? perhaps if I know that, I can properly write a response. thanks.
*always, Cat
Geezer
4 years 3 months ago
I do believe...
that an Orc is a sort of troll. [See any of the "Lord of The Rings"- stories/movies]. I like this much, stream of thought kinds of things intrigue me. ~ Geezer.
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Candlewitch
4 years 3 months ago
I feel so stupid, lol
yes I do know what an Orc is, being a fantasy nut that I am...it just didn't occur to me...my brain locked up, lol!
*always, Cat
Candlewitch
4 years 3 months ago
that new light being shed,
upon your poem; I find it stimulating! more please?
*always, Cat
Ray Whitaker
4 years 3 months ago
More?
I have to agree with Candlewitch... i’m hungry for more on this.
Race_9togo
4 years 3 months ago
Orc:
goblin
There, that's out of the way.
Heehee.
I like this little poem, it packs a good punch.
I concur with the others, I want more.
Obadiah Grey
4 years 1 month ago
I usually switch off when the
I usually switch off when the author uses the word "soul".
The following "metaphysical orc" piqued my whattsit.
A monster of the mind? A succulent, An addiction?
Hope you slept well !
Obi.