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Oct 14, 2024
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Guardians of the Night
Our dogs sometimes have trouble settling down
at night, when owls and other critters are in bloom.
Especially when we have guests.
They feel the need to check on them;
to make sure they are safe, we suppose.
Once peacefulness is confirmed
they return to the comfort of our bed,
satisfied all is well and that we are not under attack
from the goblins they might imagine.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
9 months ago
Guardians of the Night
Hello, Michael,
The loyalty and devotion of our fur-babies. This is wonderful! I wonder if the word "safe" might replace one of the "well" - just a suggestion to partner with the imagined "attack."
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
9 months ago
Thank you L! I like your
Thank you L! I like your suggestion too, and will change it.
Best