raj

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Guess who? (for a bit of fun)

lets have some fun !!...

read thisand PM me with your answer about who you think this poem is about ....I will PM you back if your guess is right. or wrong and let you know the right answer if your guess is wrong..:) PLEASE do not write your answers in the form of comments on this page..so that others can have some fun too in this guessing game..lol..

Smartly uniformed in white
short, tall, rugged and trite
in rank and file these troops
stand guard day in and day out

Few wise ones lost on the road
others take on additional load
one that's fallen out of line,
a wise crack in this bee line

Some knock while others grind
some gleam while beaming a smile
together they rock on a wintry night
tapping on their pointed toes

In silence they keep on preying
on all meat that happens their way
come night, the front ranks get
a nibble on some juicy treats

In time they'll part their ways
others won't fill their ranks
the hollows in the rank and file
will weaken a charming smile

Those who'll brave the grind
each mile and stuttering stride
will lay guard but not their pride
when it'll be time to bid adieu...

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

magics02

13 years 11 months ago

Tips tips

Okay Raj you got to give us some subtle tips on this. Is it a poet here or a person out there? Or better yet is it a person or a thing?

Got you now

tag me back:)

loved

13 years 11 months ago

if i were raj

i'd say search me
its as it does u
you please

magics02

13 years 11 months ago

I sent my guess

rain or shine back to the grind

wink:)

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Dear Mona

I have PMed to you the answer..you were way off target...now don't clench your teeth and say "Oh! how i missed this simple answer"...lol...

good try though...

pleiades

13 years 11 months ago

i'm pm-ing my guess...

cheers
p

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Pleiades

You hit bulls eye with the very first attempt..that's brilliant!..:)

cheers..

pleiades

13 years 11 months ago

cleverly written raj...

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Thank you Pleiades...i am

Thank you Pleiades...i am glad you liked it...

scribbler

13 years 11 months ago

hello

I'll send the wrong answer

magics02

13 years 11 months ago

I have been disqualified won

I have been disqualified won't be the first time Raj. Lmao. Good trying anyway.

Try another sometime get us guessing game

Love to you che bello
Mona

loved

13 years 11 months ago

lets

now share
as the problem has been resolved
and we all have been absolved

magics02

13 years 11 months ago

Yes sounds good to me loved

Mr Raj

Please give us the honor of the winning word and give Ms P her prize.

Smile and kudos to Pleiades

Mona
xox

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Pleaides

every one up here will try to seek out an answer from you...but i am confident you will not play spoil sport by spilling the beans...lol...

pleiades

13 years 11 months ago

mate...my lips are sealed

mate...my lips are sealed SHUT

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Good..stay tight lipped

Good..stay tight lipped Pleiades..lol..

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Common Xena...since you agree

Common Xena...since you agree its a lot of fun..have a dip ...there is nothing to lose in having fun..have your share of it too...i will help you guess your way to the right answer and then you will clench your teeth and say "Oops! how did i miss out on such a simple one"...lol...

cheers!

Candlewitch

13 years 11 months ago

Dear raj,

I will also pm you my wrong answer, LOL!

always, cat

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Dear Cat...

i did get your guess..and you were right it was wrong but not too wrong in your approach..i can see you used the following clues to get somewhere close to the answer but not quite..lol

white
pointed
rows
rank and file

Hooded Stranger

13 years 11 months ago

Cat

Cat,

as you know I am not one to blow my own trumpet (LOL!)...but I got it first time!...and I have had to sign a declaration of secrecy from Raj, so I can't tell you the answer!

LOL!

raj

13 years 11 months ago

thanks Dan for controlling

thanks Dan for controlling your urge to spill out the beans and realizing that holding them back is double the fun to kid others...or even black mail them ..lol...

P.S. perhaps line 20 gave you confidence that you have hit the bulls eye...lol..

Geezer

13 years 11 months ago

I think...

I have the answer!

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Geezer

i already PMed you back ...sorry your answer is not right...give it another try...i will certainly give a try to write something also on the darker side as urged by you..

Good luck and cheers!

Loreli

13 years 11 months ago

Have sent my answer

Even if it is not correct...lol...still love the poem!

Cheers,
Lori

raj

13 years 10 months ago

i already confirmed to you

i already confirmed to you that you are spot on and hit bullz eye with the very first attempt...hope you had fun.....

Congrats!!

raj

13 years 9 months ago

Hi JayCee

was it your birthday? i asked because you said you got a present.. as for the quiz i can only tell you that Judyanne PMed me the answer and she got it spot on ...but be honest and don't ask her..lol...

have fun..much love...

judyanne

13 years 9 months ago

am pm-ing my guess raj

xxxx

raj

13 years 9 months ago

Judyanne i already confirmed

Judyanne i already confirmed via PM that you got it spot on...brilliant for a first attempt right....don't tell JayCee though...let her pull out more hair..lol...

much love..