A Gun

A gun cause’s harm
To the innocent
Give justice to the guilty
Not so much the gun, but
The soul behind the gun

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

14 years 7 months ago

justice kidnapped
hidden in law
sells cement shoes
for our children
to wear
on prom night

what is hidden?
ask your children.

14 years 7 months ago

I see the truth in this comment.

14 years 7 months ago

To me if you have to use a gun to harm the innocent, your soul is already lost..
always Eddie

14 years 7 months ago

Thanks for the comment. It is much appreciated.

Always

14 years 7 months ago

Alot said in a few words. It's not the gun, it's the person behind the gun and there motives.

Interesting poem

Loads of love

Mand xxxxxxxxxx

14 years 7 months ago

I like creating a poetic picture with as few words as I can. Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate your thoughts on my poem.
Loads of love