A Gun

A gun cause’s harm
To the innocent
Give justice to the guilty
Not so much the gun, but
The soul behind the gun

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

14 years 10 months ago

justice kidnapped
hidden in law
sells cement shoes
for our children
to wear
on prom night

what is hidden?
ask your children.

14 years 10 months ago

I see the truth in this comment.

14 years 10 months ago

To me if you have to use a gun to harm the innocent, your soul is already lost..
always Eddie

14 years 10 months ago

Thanks for the comment. It is much appreciated.

Always

14 years 10 months ago

Alot said in a few words. It's not the gun, it's the person behind the gun and there motives.

Interesting poem

Loads of love

Mand xxxxxxxxxx

14 years 10 months ago

I like creating a poetic picture with as few words as I can. Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate your thoughts on my poem.
Loads of love