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Marvel Godwyn

Jan 30, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

#haiku 6

a wren flaps away
beak full of juicy meal worms
for fledglings revel

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Nigeria

Favorite Poets: Jess Tapper , Shakepeare, Akinwande Olowole Babatunde Soyinka, Eumolpus, themoonman.

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Comments

7 years 4 months ago

Yes Molly78 ,you are totally

Yes Molly78 ,you are totally right and I thank you so much for this comment.I appreciate it.

R

7 years 4 months ago

Vivid imagery created by you

Vivid imagery created by you Marvel in this Haiku....a pleasure to read it...

regards..

7 years 4 months ago

Thanks so much raj, I

Thanks so much raj, I appreciate your comment.

7 years 4 months ago

Thanks so much raj, I

Thanks so much raj, I appreciate your comment.

R

7 years 4 months ago

Hi Marvel and Molly

if you haven't visited the Forum topic of IRiz as yet in which she is proposing an even more trimmed form, I suggest you visit it...likely to interest you...

Regards...