Barbara Writes

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Haiku about Owls 5/7/5

Stalker in the night
Prowling from swaying treetops
Owl catches her prey

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

Comments

CCfire

14 years ago

Haiku is the only form I

Haiku is the only form I actually enjoy doing, and this one which strictly I think is a senryu as haiku does not deal with subjects only nature intended..either way it paints the picture.

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

Thanks Chez

i appreciate you commenting

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

Chez

I agree it is a senyru
But I wrote it for another poetry site that suggested this title for poetry writing thanks again
I wanted to share it here also

raj

14 years ago

Barbara

i am a haiku fan and i loved this one...

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

Raj

thanks I am glad you like

Leonard

14 years ago

Barbara

Wow - one of my favourite forms on one of my favourite birds. A beautiful portrait of a beautiful bird.

Leonard

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

Leonard

thanks for the comment. glad i could write a haiku about your favorite bird. in one of your favorite writing form.
glad the portrait came out so beautifully. i worked hard on making it stand out

scribbler

14 years ago

hi

I like your Haiku. Too often, I start writing one and next thing I know its a 6 stanza poem lol................stan

Barbara Writes

14 years ago

hi Stan

i can appreciate that because when i first start writing haiku i use to so the same. glad you like it