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Half Past Midnight
It is half past midnight, and it is raining
Blood is flowing somewhere; it is staining
Beneath her feet, the red is steadily flowing
There is no sign of it ever slowing
It is leaving a stain that will never go away
It will still remain even after the break of day
At half past midnight, no one is around
No one to hear his awful death sound
She left him lying dying on the floor behind
She closed the door with no regret in her mind
He soon realized what she had done
She had ended their love with a gun
It is way half past midnight the Sun is rising
What she had done, she is slowly realizing
She is not sad that her love is now gone
He should have never done her so wrong
As he lay dying, bleeding out on the floor
Shot between the eyes with a forty-four
He knew that he would never be mourned
He learned Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Depressed 1
2 years 4 months ago
Thanks
Thanks Alexa I am glad you enjoyed.
Geezer
2 years 4 months ago
I guess...
you have gotten some of that depression out of your system now, I hope it helps! It always helps Killer to get rid of bad feelings. Justice is served. ~ Geez.
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Depressed 1
2 years 4 months ago
Comes And Goes
Thanks Geezer. It comes and goes.