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Dec 01, 2024
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Half-Written Book
I’m a half-written book
Some lines are highlighted
Some are all black
Crossed out
So I can never look back
The corners are worn
from all the years I've been writing
The ink is smeared
on the worst pages
Some pages are faded
I’ve reread them too many times
Whole chapters are missing
from this story of mine
My favorite chapters were filled
with you
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Now here I sit
trying to write the next chapter,
wondering how the rest of the book will unfold
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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