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Oct 07, 2024
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Halloween fun
Witches, pumpkins, and ghosts galore,
Even a phoney Dumbledore.
Vampires, Werewolves, and Pennywise,
Creepy realistic Halloween disguise .
Trawling the streets, shouting trick or treat,
Collecting a veritable stash of sweets.
Sharing the haul at the end of the night,
Once you have given your neighbours a fright.
Then Infront of the TV, to watch a scare fest,
Oh Freddy Kruger, you always scared best.
With your looks so disturbing, and ever so odd,
So glad I never watched it, all on my tod.
Those Halloween memories, a scary delight,
Sadly enjoyed for only one night.
And as I pack my costume away,
I mentally plan for the next costume day.
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neopoet
9 months 2 weeks ago
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Geezer
9 months 2 weeks ago
I enjoyed...
the whole thing, right up until the last word! But what is a Tod? I know that sometimes we have lines that we just hate to get rid of, but when you have to make up a word to get the rhyme right... I think you have a big vocabulary and enough smarts to figure that line out, without making up a word. ~ Geez.
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Tigger Kaz
9 months 1 week ago
Not a made up word..
on one's tod
phrase of tod
informal•British
on one's own.
"I'm going to do something, not just sit here on my tod"
I guess I forget that people from other parts of the world, may not understand some traditional English phrases.
Geezer
9 months 1 week ago
In that case...
I would put a comma in between the word [it] and [all]. It was the odd way of expressing it, that made me think that it was a made-up word for T.V.
~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
9 months 1 week ago
Dear Tiger,
I love Halloween poetry, or any spooky works! You have laid down an amusing piece of entertainment here. I thank you for it!
*hugs, Cat