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Hands Across the Park

The New York winter sun
has risen in your East,
and will set in my West,
for this one shortest day.
A world shrunk to a patch
of wooded arbours
where souls can meet
and find their willing flesh.

This snow-cloaked park
is all that lies between,
its crooked, spinstered trees,
naked from abandoned leaves,
are veiled and downed with
the frost-flecked confetti
of fleeting bridal relief.

Your seventieth to
my eighty first,
with many roads and
twisted paths between.
But none where line of sight
is lost to break our gaze.

Your brown, my blue,
their two philosophies
deep liquid pools
of trust that beggar words,
though we will speak them
because we must
to be ourselves.

Words that will bind us
where we linger hand in hand,
conjoined by thoughts
and then full lips;
warmed by this local sun
that will change the paths
which drove us north from south,
and bring our distant souls,
lost in their wandering,
together at its zenith.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

About the Author

Region, Country: China/Sichuan/Chengdu, CHN

Favorite Poets: Yeats, Elliot, Auden, Keats, Shelley, Byron

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Comments

Rett

Rett

14 years 8 months ago

Professor

I wish I could find something to criticize on this, but I can't. It is well written, flows smoothly and I love the use of words in it. Well done sir.

professor

professor

14 years 8 months ago

Thanks Rett

Means a great deal coming from you. All the best Keith

professor

professor

14 years 8 months ago

Thanks Lil Sis

Actually there is an intention to leave the reader hanging at the end since the final bringing together is supposed to be only the beginning. I suppose I felt the whole poem was about their coming together in this dramatic fashion in Central Park.....what happened next is another story. However I will give it some thought. Love and hugs BB

professor

professor

14 years 7 months ago

Thanks so much

for such an appreciative comment Morgana and welcome back to Neopoet. Best wishes Keith

K

Kailashana2

14 years 7 months ago

Hi Keith.

Hi Keith.

Lovely poem about love's ardour, inside its arbor of limbs entwined and poems rhymed. ;-)

~A

Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

14 years 7 months ago

coalescent virtue

seems to come together and meld - I imagine Central Park and the communities that bound its sides and how in such a large city there are many subcommunities - varied and diverse and yet its dynamic brings them together as one.... maybe I am reading too much into this poem, but that is the chord it struck on this reading.