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Jan 24, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Happy birthday dear Aquarians wef 21 Jan all years ..

A very Happy Birthday
to all AQUARIANS

Beauty rebounds in your folds
you are soft and sweet too
so many love you
but you must take care of flatterers
who try to woo you...
ere you fall too

but since 'tis your birthday today
in the light of sun may you stay..
have a Happy Birthday
and bathe also today..

the beaches are warm still
they beckon you in bikinis,
if you only will...
Happy Birthday
to all
AQUARIANS
today

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Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Seren

Seren

12 years 5 months ago

Happy Birthday !!

nice poem for our Aquarian friends, how true some of it is ... I am a virgo long time before I get another Bday

I cant see anything to change its a tribute and as you know I am loath to offer changes to things like this

nicely done my friend

love JC xxx

loved

loved

12 years 5 months ago

Then I will have to auction

my holy pockets

do you know
once when i was very poor
my class teacher commented
seeing my lovely green sweater

ung one
ur more
HOLEY
than
Righteous..

haa hahahhaa

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 5 months ago

Loved

Just wait for the cusp to pass
After Pisces , Aries is free at last
then you should honour my fiery ways
with presents that with light my days
I hear that my birthstone is a diamond
Zircon will do, as of them, I am fond
But give me a surprise that will light my eye's
A pure crystal of carbon hope you don't realise
Until it is sent on its way to me, just one carat will do,
I shall sell the damn thing and buy a ticket to visit you..
La, La, it is I Sparrow, young bard
I taunt you as it is not so hard
Yenti, and Ian.T wont be out soon
I have lost the key to the dark room..
ROTFLM feathered AO
Yours Sparrow