Barbara Writes

Jan 01, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Happy New Year Poem

Happy New year
it's twenty twenty
a year of forty four..

another decade of life
to bring things alive
another world to vibe..

it's not who you are
it's who you create
in a era never known..

many years of barbarianism
the darkness ruled
now light is winning..

a new way of thinking
there is war no more
peace to the earth..

love and compassion
found the one percent...

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

Comments

Geezer

5 years 6 months ago

I'm afraid...

that it is all wishful thinking, but nice to ponder. For some reason, I kept feeling that this was going to break out in rhyme!
It flowed that well, I guess. The sign of a well crafted work.~ Geezer.
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Barbara Writes

5 years 6 months ago

thanks

it was a impromptu write

scribbler

5 years 6 months ago

Hey Mark

It's you yankees who have a strange sounding dialect lol

scribbler

5 years 6 months ago

Come on yourself.

I was only joking about.

Barbara Writes

5 years 6 months ago

thanks stan

we from the south and defend it lol...i dont know what he see but it's all good

Barbara Writes

5 years 6 months ago

thanls

my southern dialect change? ohh my is that a good thing? I have been called ass backward on here in the past lol

scribbler

5 years 6 months ago

Hey Carolina girl

I like that this poem espouses the possible good that could come in the year ahead

weirdelf

5 years 6 months ago

Where have you been living?

Like Gee said, sounds like wishful thinking, not the shame of a country that voted in Trump.

I have been unoffically your mentor for over a decade and can attest to your steady increase in control over the language. Barbara, you are magnificent!