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hat trick eh

My Mom's Smiles
she left to me
all in smiles
poetry wise...

Next came autumnal one
no intended pun
I too ran
and
also partly won

Now they say
for Red Wagon* run
I wonder whether to shun
or
beg your pardon

I am now an old shot gun
to be kept in a mortuary,
sorry, may be I'd meant
an Archery
what should say yee
should I attempt a
H A T
Trick
now too

*I have been ....on a RED wagon once

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

7 years 9 months ago

Yes, Yes, Yes,

Go for the hat trick, is that a magical trick. Or three goals. Nice poem Regards Roscoe...

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 9 months ago

THANKS

Roscoe I have done so already
do care to read it!