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Oct 04, 2017
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hat trick eh
My Mom's Smiles
she left to me
all in smiles
poetry wise...
Next came autumnal one
no intended pun
I too ran
and
also partly won
Now they say
for Red Wagon* run
I wonder whether to shun
or
beg your pardon
I am now an old shot gun
to be kept in a mortuary,
sorry, may be I'd meant
an Archery
what should say yee
should I attempt a
H A T
Trick
now too
*I have been ....on a RED wagon once
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
7 years 9 months ago
Yes, Yes, Yes,
Go for the hat trick, is that a magical trick. Or three goals. Nice poem Regards Roscoe...
lovedly
7 years 9 months ago
THANKS
Roscoe I have done so already
do care to read it!