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Dec 06, 2012
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He Crept
He crept up on me
slowly
played my strings
tenderly
lowered walls
gingerly
built trust
persistently
teased me
constantly
praised me
loudly
I love him
unconditionally
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Seren
12 years 7 months ago
Heya Sue
I like the shorter lines I often use them myself, I really liked the poem I hope you showed him ;)
sincerely JC
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
Ah thanks so much well I
Ah thanks so much well I married him lol glad u enjoyed
kind regards
Sueb
Seren
12 years 7 months ago
I've been engaged for over 10
I've been engaged for over 10 years one of these days I will marry his arse just hasnt seemed that important to me, im happy hes happy, he on the other hand is another matter he cant wait to get married
~JC
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
i only got married this
i only got married this y ear in July and the hardest part is living with him because we didn't beforehand u have all that work done lol x
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
You are such a victim
sueb, almost every poem of yours I have read makes you sound pathetic.
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
thanks Jess
thanks Jess