HELLO ALL WHY DOUBT

HELLO ALL WHY DOUBT
now all are sure they will
DIE
NO GOD
LORD
DIVINE
OR
PA IN LAW
will ever come to save em

NO ONE
will or did or does
get a second chance
so make do
and
love romance
you came hello all

PERCHANCE
BE it France
or during a celestial dance
enjoy oh guys
this life is no
once more

I'm struggling since long
no doc knows till when
ashes will be our destination
save trees
hope you shall agree with me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

Geezer

3 years ago

I DO agree...

and hope that the death of your death will be swift and painless, [at least swift]. You have written about your death so many times, that I am reminded of "The boy who cried wolf" eventually when we hear of your death, we won't believe it and you will be the legend of an Elvis Presley-like conspiracy! LoL
~ Geez.
. P.S. I hope you live on for another hundred years, just to spread the love!

lovedly

3 years ago

YEAH Gee and CATS

I too got a brain wave just now
I saw a wolf
no lion
then lion came
no man

now old age makes one senile
can't help it
none listen I am well
they all tighten their grip
now eat this not that
docs say be not a rat
heavy body who will lift
so let it come and go slowly
into the forest of eternity
LOL will ye at me
I ain't dying
till suns keep rising
hahaha fun no
in sadness enjoy a poke
let my life become a joke
ELVIS EXPRESSLY

Geezer

3 years ago

I'm so glad...

you ain't dying! Ok, ok, already! We know all about the fact that nobody gets out of here alive! We just don't want to be reminded of it almost daily. I do so love the play on Elvis Expressley! Now, give us something something about how wonderful life is and how to enjoy it! ~ Geez.
.

Candlewitch

3 years ago

dear lovedly,

I agree with Geezer.

*hugs, Cat