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Jan 27, 2023
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Hello Dreamers
I'm a pragmatic being
Dreams are subconscious fantasies
brain has synaptic maps
of all occurrences
and
they surface oddly....
Attach no importance to dreams...
why must we uselessly scream
It's just a simple thoughtless
boundless fancy
and a loss of any recollection...
you call it
Nostalgic
Just skip over the dream
by next morning
unless you day dream
About This Poem
Last Few Words: We all dream many just forget it...
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Hello Dreams
Hello, Lovedly,
I love dreaming. Mine are vivid and lively, and a whole lotta fun! It sounds like the reference to screaming in this poem may speak of the dreams that aren't so fun - and that is a bummer. I agree to not take dreams too seriously. Sweet dreams!
Lav
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
Thanks Lav
I dream day and night
during day ones I smile
at night
depends who comes
but for me dreams are
FUN
Geezer
2 years 5 months ago
I believe...
that dreams are the subconscious-mind talking to your conscious mind. The subconscious doesn't have language of its own, so it uses symbolism to get your attention. Your conscious mind fills in the blanks of any conversation, trying make dreams have sense. Subconscious-mind is with us all the time, it never sleeps, and it sees things that conscious mind doesn't notice, making connections and figuring things out. Lovedly, I think you are finally making the connection to reality. Too bad, we will miss your zany dreams. LoL. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
Geez
I have no words for thee ....I have read so many of your analyses ...I wonder how you are so highly gifted ...
Yes my scientific imagery speaks for me ...
we are just moving atoms
----electrons ----neutrons and protons ..in a circle
going about the sun... as we draw solar energy ....
till we have spare electrons
Then all is forgotten ....sub and -conscousness merge ...
we become like a burning butterfly
towards etrnity
as ash/dust fly
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
Thanks MARK
I record at the instant then add up here and there