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Dec 03, 2017
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HELLO GOODBYE
In life we laugh
In death we cry
We say hello
We say goodbye
We’re born to live
Yet, we live to die
WIZDUMBs by JA 744
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Keith Logan
7 years 7 months ago
Lovely
tight little piece with only two iambs per line. Unfortunately an extra syllable unaccountably crept into the last line - Yet live to die.
Simon
7 years 7 months ago
little but mighty
this is what i call little but mighty