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Nov 28, 2020
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HELLO POLE STARS
If you permit me to say
poet,
your poetry is a class
but well above the level I feel
of those who NEO'S hand- clasp
You can't be understood
by normal guys of my unintelligent level
without a thesaurus.
So good as you may and are
beyond reach of a guy
in hurry
in a car
you in the wilderness of time are
a lonely star
distance wise beyond the Pole Star
I remain in my old perforated car
About This Poem
Last Few Words: TRY COMPOSING SIMPLER POETRY UNDERSTOOD BY CLOTS LIKE ME What have you to say greater poets
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
nonsense
that's it ma'am thanks