"Her Smile Reborn" erotic content

A warm breeze,
caresses her body,
touching all,
in places seldom seen.

Eyes closed,
capturing fantasy,
hands follow,
the path of lovers,
leaving fingers wet.

Baring all,
teeth clinched,
her breath stolen,
as hands remember,
forgotten ecstasies.

A pleasure reborn,
in erotic moments,
her form quivers,
sweat beads her brow.

Freedom in silence,
now broken,
primal screams,
nails tear skin.

Climax begins,
rippling in waves,
just under flesh,
as her smile is born.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I'm still playing with freeverse.I also wanted to try the unknown, the female perspective if intimacy.I hope Ive done it justice.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Maryland, USA

Favorite Poets: I have many favorite poets but I like Poe the most.I would also feel wrong if I didn't include music to this also, for I find it to be of great inspiration.These are lyrics to a song by Monster Magnet called Ozium, it never fails to put me in the writing mood and thought I would share it, lol., " I'm up to my brain in the mire of an ancient swamp, Pteranadon smiles at me and flies up to god, Baby let me drink deep from your globes of reality, Writhe your naked ass to the mindless groove, baby give your tongue a taste and follow me up to my room, the bullgod has your head, and baby thats just fine, now it is time, we became the mighty cell, wrap those hungry jacks? to the mindless groove, they say we've got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, baby, the faster you gyrate the faster we'll be there, arms up overhead, a goddess in the ancient song, work that mighty world to the mindless groove, they say weve got a life time but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied, I will not be denied, they say weve got a lifetime, but we know that ain't true, I will not be denied I will not be denied"

Comments

KINGZOMBIE

14 years 1 month ago

Thank you Shirl:-)

Glad you enjoyed it, its kind of nice to blush every now and again I think, lol.Thanks again Shirl:-)

judyanne

14 years 1 month ago

whew

had to read this with my hands over my eyes lol
great write..... tasteful - just.....
but extremely good descriptive
love judy

KINGZOMBIE

14 years 1 month ago

Thanks Judy:-)

Hope you didn't have too much trouble reading from behind your hands, lol.Thanks for commenting:-)

Arrow

14 years 1 month ago

Mmmm . . .

if writing the female perspective, it would help to write as the female (e.g., "I", "my" vs. "her"). I still get the sense of a man looking at and thinking about a woman rather than a woman experiencing. Obviously, there are all varieties of woman but when I think of writing erotica from a woman's perspective, I think of Boxer's "Innocence in Extremis" - I think an excerpt can be found on-line. Ah, it's hard to write of the intimacies of another!