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hey they replace

you deliberate well
and
express any poets’ desire
to achieve immortality
for eternity
as you alone feel
that you are born to steal
the show
that all mankind does propose
and
you alone
are the only one
to show that you
singularly
at least
on
Neopoet

glow

congrats friend
all the same, to you
hope Jess replaces me now
with you...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

12 years 10 months ago

Dear Loved,

This made me sad. It sounds like you are having a hard time. I wish for all the best for you. If you need someone to talk to please pm me.

always, Cat

loved

loved

12 years 10 months ago

thanks Cat

no I'm fine ...was a bit busy this week
shall resume shortly
you are a kind friend and person
how's your health now?