Hi Coos for the AEC

Manouver Neo ship
guide it through the turbulence
using your rudder

Set it on course
of a wonderful voyage
for those on the Board

You are the sailors
in whom we have laid our trust
deservedly so

So set up the sails
in the chosen direction
give the wheel a heave..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

Race_9togo

14 years 3 months ago

Raj,

While I find myself blushing at your accolades(heehee), I find the structure of these to be excellent, and of course, as someone who loves sailing, the metaphor cannot be faulted!
And "Hi Coos"...I love that.
Well done, these are very good.

raj

14 years 3 months ago

Hi Jim

thanks for dwelling on these haikus and for your appreciative comment....i thought there is a need to pep you guys up and boosting your confidence while you set sail in your role to steady the ship as well as guide it on course ...

good to know these coos were audible...hehehe..

warm regards..