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Hi five mama I've come

Hi five mama I've come

Mama’s upstairs
Many always call mama
When they have it at night
or when they are white in fright
and now you are also right
mama is awaiting her sonny upright
but not ever in sight
as many mamas will be seen
floating once you are there
God knows where
is our mama up there....?

so take care
take her last snap
she must be taking a long outstanding nap
and
may not say sonny
now come mamma’s way
sorry no skirt now to display
we all have none here anyway

you also come nude right
and
forever in freedom stay
mama loves you still
but here you will have to find your own way!

Hi sonny, stay
there
as long as you may!!!...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

wesley snow

wesley snow

9 years 10 months ago

The ending...

hell, the whole poem had the feel of a submission to the horror workshop. Mama is terrifying. I may be reading this all wrong, but I did not like Mama and I pity poor Sonny.