Rula

Nov 13, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

In His Elements...The Unbeatable He

Be whatever you want to be—
Be the drifting cloud,
Or the free-buzzing bee;
Be the timeless-running river,
Or the wild and whirling sea.
Be the ocean, vast and calm;
Be the meadow,
Or the steadfast-rooted tree.
Be whatever you want to be.

I see you—the benevolent sky,
The forever-blinking star
That never fades, never dies.
I see you—the shining sun,
The brilliant moon,
Unwavering and high.

The throbbing heart you are,
The breath that fills,
The guiding light, constant and clear—
Forever near, never far,
A beacon bright to steer.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: To my better half that never fails me

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Leslie

8 months 1 week ago

Rula

You've given something to something or someone.The freedom to be what they want to be. I loved this theme and wish that I could get certain people to do the same for me. Great poem with prayers which I'm sending your way!

Rula

8 months ago

Hello John

Thank you! Your comment is highly appreciated

Candlewitch

8 months 1 week ago

Dear Rula,

Your personal beauty is in every word and line and verse of this poem... your loving heart shines on. I cannot choose favorite lines, for they all ring bright and true! If you do not mind, I would like to print out this poem and tape it where I can see it?

much love, Candle

Rula

8 months ago

Dear Candle

You've honored me and my poem.
Someone once said, as the poet submitted his/her poem, it's no more his but the readers.
You simply make my day with your words dear friend.

Lavender

8 months ago

In His Elements

Hello, Rula,
So sincere and endearing. I feel the deep adoration and appreciation you have for your "better half" as it swells from these lovely words.
A beautiful poem.
Thank you!
Lx

Rula

8 months ago

Many thanks

go to you my lovely friend.
I'm so grateful for reading and leaving such kind words.
Always appreciate it.

LilacsandLace

8 months ago

This is such a lovely poem,

This is such a lovely poem, brimming with love and appreciation for your other half. The second verse is my favourite; a sense of worship and admiration, the way one looks at the night sky in awe and wonder. "I see you" - those three words are so validating, so reassuring, so empowering. Just beautiful all around.

Rula

8 months ago

Hello Lilacsandleace

I don't think that we've met before so nice to have a new friend to my page.
I appreciate the way you've read the poem and got the feeling between the lines. That stanza was my favorite as well. :)
Thank you again. I'm looking forward to reading your works... Soon