With his fingertips

They met
and traced the lines of poetry
into skin
that night
a light shined into the darkness
and the moon
glowed.

Heaven and earth moved
a little closer.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: With her fingertips is part one of this poem, I think.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

Comments

Candlewitch

13 years 9 months ago

Hi Anna,

Are you aware that this poem is posted twice? Nice, btw.

Always, Cat

edit: Oops... just realised my mistake! LOL. Very nice...

Kailashana2

13 years 9 months ago

Morning folks, the poem was

Morning folks, the poem was NOT posted twice.

One of the poems is "With HIS fingertips" the other is With HER fingertips. Two separate poems, one joined fingertip, so to speak when spirit touches two to become one. Thanks for your reading.

My son married yesterday. I suppose they were a marriage poem, sort of.

Intermittent sun between days and days and days of rain today.

~A :

judyanne

13 years 9 months ago

ahhh anna

beautiful

just one little thing
'a light shined in the darkness' - perhaps better grammer would be 'shone' ??

love judy

Kailashana2

13 years 9 months ago

Thanks, love, Judy for

Thanks, love, Judy for reading.

Shone offends my ear's sensitivity, though in order to make it grammatically pleasing to other ears who may be offended by improper grammar.. I'll add to to the line.

http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/shined.html