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Dec 28, 2015
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his train episode
This is the most natural series...
of a sleeping serpent...
with the warmth of his apples...
waiting for the seed to be ripened...
then implanted
as did Adam into Eve...
such is your train journey story.
twill is lovely...
as comes out a smaller plant-
---- combined----
like two in blue...
she and you...
the outcome of train journey
naturally would do...
for you two!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Buddha
9 years 5 months ago
I enjoyed the inuendos
I enjoyed the inuendos burried in your poem. The work flows nicely.
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
ok thanks
kindness
others too whenever