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Jan 05, 2013
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holding her eye .....2009
the eyes
the smile
Ah! the gaze
the lips twitching do amaze
the dimple cheeks one can’t ignore,
the wink and slant look all do adore
the cleavage is where, hangs an eye
no one can say why…
oh! a lass always looks into
the other’s eye
and
as she holds it for a second more
the voyeur knows
he is in for much more ..
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frederick Kesner
12 years 5 months ago
hopefully the voyeur
is in fact her lover!
Else she will be hard-put to extricate herself
form a potentially sticky situation. :-)
loved
12 years 5 months ago
your introductory line friend..hopef...
gives one an impression
that perhaps the voyeur in you
steps in
haahahhaa
howz uuu??
Frederick Kesner
12 years 5 months ago
still
under medication.
The doctors will have to run tests again
before they set me free to graze on the mountainside.
All else is good otherwise. Thanks for asking after me :-)
loved
12 years 5 months ago
only sheep graze
in Ottawa Canada
there is a museum
which shows a large
SHEEP
below that it says
they she .. goes in for size
I wonder ...
well glad the medication will ensure
that you graze and gaze as before
as fresh hopefully
knowing you so..
INSTANT RECOVERY
Frederick Kesner
12 years 5 months ago
baa
in a way we all are sheep
and that may be enough material
for a poem of its own. lol.
loved
12 years 5 months ago
yaaaaaaaaaaaa
bbahh