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Jan 17, 2016
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the hole truth
Lust love thirst
Lust love and thirst or thrust
All above are but a natural outcome
of human sexual deliberations
tell me why love
if you have no lust
also tell me why lust
if you have no love
the world revolves
about the central pole
Universal man
is in search of the key hole
all who talk about sin as such
are not human in as much
as they are all hypocrites
Tell me how will you
produce a progeny
if you have no lust
nor love of human sex
you must totally be
of a mind bereft
sad to be so blunt
and brute
now don't brood
you enforced me to be
nakedly
so blatantly rude....
yet I ain't so crude!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
alidzain
9 years 5 months ago
loved
I disagree with the 4th stanza. lol. I do talk about sins but I'm no hypocrite!
Alid
lovedly
9 years 5 months ago
sin is anything
that pricks
not necessarily at night
but during conscious hours
when heart beats cease for a while
when you think of a child
in malfeasant texture
what tis1