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Dec 17, 2019
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All kingdoms
Needs their freedom
And to be ruled by the people of wisdom.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Sweet and good government is all we need.
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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c lynn brooks
5 years 6 months ago
Simon
need singular
please expand on this you have a good start