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Aug 14, 2021
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Hop-toads... [Haiku for Stretching wings workshop]
Hoppy-toads, old frogs
Swim forever in their youth
Ignorance is bliss
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Rhyme for Stretching Wings Workshop.
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Born To Be Wild
I float upon stormy seas
Forever in my youth
Can't bring me to my knees
I'll ride the blustered winds
All my care-free days
Don't think of me a fool
I won't ever change my ways
I'll tame the ways of age
Figure out the road
Keep on jumping all around
Like Spring's hoppy-toad
So don't tell me to go slower
I just can't comply
If I say I will
Just figure it a lie
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
scribbler
3 years 10 months ago
Hi
A very good condensation
Geezer
3 years 10 months ago
Thanks...
I tried to do as I thought it should be done, glad I got it right.~ Geez.
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