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Hope
What am I?
A home with no hope.
Is this how I'm supposed to be?
I have children, but no one of them could think of me nor remember me.
They have all traveled to a far city
Without my concept,
Who will care for me?
I am a friend of the moon at night,
And an enemy to the sun by day.
The breeze painted me with dust,
And I'm not conscious to mention its color.
My body is too heavy to walk my feet
I'm like a dead being,
I can't leave where I am, I have been glued to the ground, and been surrounded by the grass and flowers of nature.
No difference between me and a caged bird,
Where can my help come from?
Each day, I look up at the sky,
Hoping for my life to change.
Things keep getting worse everyday.
But, there is one thing I know,
And that's the will of my Father.
My doors and windows
Will be open one day.
And my kids will return and remember me.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
5 years 6 months ago
wonderful
i love the flow and imagery..i not sure you are a empty or something else..either way i loved reading it and imaging this journey you are on
Umeh Collins Ebube
5 years 6 months ago
Thanks, much for your
Thanks, much for your inspiring. comment.
Barbara Writes
5 years 6 months ago
Hey
You’re welcome