Hope (rhyming haiku)

A light here to stay
Within my soul every day
Showing me the way

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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1 year 7 months ago

Yet says a lot. I really like Haiku and I like how yours rhymes. Well done.

1 year 7 months ago

Thank you Rose, I appreciate your reading and your comments.
PS: love your poems

1 year 7 months ago

I always appreciate your feedback

1 year 7 months ago

Just a few words and so illuminating

1 year 7 months ago

Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it very much

1 year 7 months ago

Yes I know that there is no real form of rhyming haiku. I just wanted to try rhyming my poem.
Thank you for your comments.

1 year 7 months ago