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Jan 23, 2020
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Hope of Spring
Lovely seasons we all love
and
kids also all above
somehow season can never win
with loveliest kith and kin
dream not of the days gone
cold youth has passed like dawn
hope for a sunnier tomorrow
ere comes autumn again
be in Rome or Spain
but
healthy always one must remain
ever in hopes
alive live till end
again and again
Live in Hope
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Obadiah Grey
5 years 5 months ago
I particularly like.
I particularly like.
"dream not of the days gone
cold youth has passed like dawn
hope for a sunnier tomorrow
ere comes autumn again"
Obi.
lovedly
5 years 5 months ago
thanks a million
Obi for liking this
"dream not of the days gone
cold youth has passed like dawn
lovedly
5 years 5 months ago
Thanks a lot Jerry
It helps me breathe a sigh
I can compose poetry
gem aside