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Feb 19, 2014
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Hot Ginger
It's in the tingle
of a hot ginger toddy
that turns me on
when my body
needs some fire
or
it's in the tingle
of a hot ginger 'body'
that turns me on
when my totty
needs some fire
About This Poem
Last Few Words: word play foreplay
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
11 years 4 months ago
A nice pun Ells
I like the first version best as it makes more sense for me, but all in all there is something to ponder in both.
keep writing.
Race_9togo
11 years 4 months ago
LOL
good stuff Betty, funny as hell!
Roscoe Lane
11 years 4 months ago
Read this,
Read this yesterday but had to run before i could comment, i was trying to think of a humorous comment. Anyway getting back to today, i loved this very good poem. Love Roscoe..
eightmenout
11 years 4 months ago
I read this when you first
I read this when you first posted it. Sorry that I did not leave any comment. I will try to be better about that in the future.
There isn't much to say on this one other than it's great. I flowed nicely and I especially liked the "suggestive" tone of it. I feel like you offered just enough to draw the reader in.
Scott
Lamar Ingraham
8 years 2 months ago
Re. As per 'Hot Ginger'
Not only have you been a fantastic writer to me, but you have taught me how write to inspire other people. Thank you for being such a great role model.