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Aug 31, 2022
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Hugs
Constant longing of our days
Tears of wonton hope
We cry this time not for sadness
Having little else to cope
I feel this often too
I’m swept under the rug
One thing always brings me back
The warm embrace of a loving hug
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I hope you have all felt this.
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
Hugs are...
best served fresh and warm, right out of the heart. Your title is simple, yet evocative of strong emotion. I don't think there are many people out there, that don't enjoy a good hug. Nice read and good feel. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
2 years 10 months ago
Hugs
are simply the best! They tend to make all else disappear and calm an uneasy heart. This poem is short and sweet. I think we all could use a hug sometimes!
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
keep hugging
keep hugging
many are wanting lovingly they are still struggling for warm hugging all are welcome by me in CORRIDORS of time still stand in waiting silently