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Aug 05, 2021
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Humans
We are humans.
We charge into battle.
No regard for our own body.
We just feel our souls on fire.
The shooting stars lead us.
To doom. To freedom.
We are humans.
We follow the wind.
The cracks do not stop us.
Our human body flurries on.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
4 years 2 months ago
Hi SEJ
Welcome. I have been experimenting with this piece of writing. I can say that I'm looking forward to any edits you make.
Thomas
scribbler
4 years 2 months ago
Greetings
Welcome to Neopoet. You captured the best of being human. Had you thought about also capturing the bad parts? If either case I enjoyed it. If you have problems on site just give me a holler and if I can't help I'll point you to somebody who can,,,,,,stan
Obadiah Grey
4 years 2 months ago
Liked it all,
Liked it all,
thought the last four lines were great.
(psssst, it should be, "We are human".) I think.
Obi.