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Oct 10, 2011
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Humor in Writing Workshop 2- Vampire
There was a vamp who did bite
All the ladies took fright
His speed was such
He didn’t move too much
But fell on a spike from a height
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weirdelf
13 years 11 months ago
rhythm is so important in limericks
you really need to read them aloud.
Hear the difference
There was a vamp who did bite
the ladies took a big fright
His speed was such
He didn’t move much
But fell on a spike from a height
lines 1,2 and 5 scan the same, 3 and 4 are shorter.
cool getting a half rhyme in the last line