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Oct 10, 2011
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Humor in writing workshop- first attempt - Booze Hound
There is an old lush named Booze Hound
When attempting to walk hits the ground
Then pukes and he burps
He goes through the works
causing havoc all the way round
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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lou
13 years 9 months ago
Chrys
Thank you, i have taken your advise.
lou