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Jun 27, 2015
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Hunters Assemble!
Word has reached the team
Digit is back to blow off steam
Still Killer and Nevermore
have yet to make a score
The insider is ready for action
Grace is waiting for instructions
while Dr Chaz dreams of facing Digit
to end the king's heartbeat
The reporter is their informer,
gathering datas to brief the others
When the key players are in place
they planned the first phase
This is the war council
where hunters assemble
in the fight against the ruthless,
monsters wearing human faces
When they hear the call
the hunters stand tall.
United, one and all,
gathering at the hall
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
10 years ago
Alid
This is Jack Sparrow here, I saw Digit reading this write of yours, he has up and gone out to places unknown to me, he had that look on his face of stern reality of death, and his minds maze directing his ways, I hope you have good luck with your friends and their quest to kill but in doing so do they not become the same as Digit ???
Yours, Jack.
alidzain
10 years ago
nope
they kill the ones who threaten peace and took law into their own hands.They are part of the special task force approved by the government. Their job is to enforce the law.
Alid
lovedly
10 years ago
When will u chair
NEOPOET'S Chair?
alidzain
10 years ago
neopoet's chair?
gee, you pose a difficult question. I really don't know.
Alid