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RoseBlack
RoseBlack
Jan 26, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Hybrid

Skin like snow
Amber eyes of fire
Vermillion velvet lips
Gnarled by opalescent fangs

Ivory talons
That snatch in the night
Drinking blood from her victims
A gorey sight

Howling at the moon
She cried out in vain
A mix of confusion and purpose
Hybrid is her name

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison

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RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks Kat

The wheels are spinning....a mix of lycan and vampire poems...perhaps my own book...

Indivisible_Origin

Indivisible_Origin

2 years 5 months ago

Minotaurs

What of those? Any in your repertoire? I wrote of one once ages ago. I'm a fan of your work.

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

Hello

I have not written about minotaurs. I'm am more into Lycans and vampires. I am glad you like my work.

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 5 months ago

I was considering

A series.. I like the whole lycan and vampire concept...even before the Underworld became popular. I am not sure how well I can do with the artwork but it would be fun to try...great idea. thank you!

Seren

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Dear Carrie

I loved the carry on from Wolf Moon. I really think it's a great poem.

Looking forward to the rest of your series.

Brava!!!

Love & hugs Jayne xxx

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 5 months ago

Hybrid

Hello, Carrie,
This seems to flow as a natural realm for you - great writing!
L