judyanne

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I Am

I AM Being
Oblivious Grace, Eternal Serenity
awareness ebbed
languidly infused
undisturbed, ubiquitous

Thought stirs essence
a seed of need quivers, a fidget
flutters the fabric
irradiates a candle far away
now to be forever perceived

rippling breeze gently brushes substance
a yawn takes space from me
a spark of perception
I own interest

a quest incites energy
born exploding a singularity

colourful bursts of vibrant brilliance
shatter the dark

light streams -
swirls magically in whirlpools of incandescence

a gasp
within, a knowing is allowed

i am manifest

freely wrapping, vaguely knotting
roaming
gathering knowledge

endlessly
through myriad experience
illustrious time
immeasurable emotion

occasionally to circle back
for a Day in Benevolent Grace
until a dream again stirs desire
and boredom compels to explore
to remember

no destination
forever somewhere

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

Comments

Esker

13 years 5 months ago

dreams of beaut y

"undisturbed, ubiquitous"
fave line

languor about this thats pleasant
and a sharp underlying meaning
about taking that pause midstep
for me anyway to examine
something more then just
the sense of the ordinary

exquisite Judyanne

Thank You!

judyanne

13 years 5 months ago

hi esker

thank you very much for the great comments
so glad you could relate to this
love judy
xxxx

Roscoe Lane

13 years 5 months ago

Faultless,

Faultlessly fabulous piece of poetry, great to readout loud, love it. Love Roscoe...

judyanne

13 years 5 months ago

hi roscoe

thank you very much for the read and great comments
muchly appreciated
love judy
xxx

Candlewitch

13 years 5 months ago

Dear Judy,

Roscoe is so right! This piece is a MUST to be reat out loud! Breathtaking!

always, Cat

judyanne

13 years 5 months ago

dear cat

thank you so very much for the read and the very supportive comment
love judy
xxxx

Nordic cloud

13 years 1 month ago

Tossed in the leaves of

Tossed in the leaves of ancient thoughts
your spring poem gives a vitality to its message,
clothed in words of colourful description,
we can read this many times
and each time get something else...from somewhere!

annanya

loved

13 years 1 month ago

roving down the corridors of a hospy i looked around

at every sister,
but couldn't find one like you
wow…
I begged for dictionary to improve my vocabulary ,
they all laughed at me
mad maybe!
ask for oxygen or an intravenous injection
or take one a side maybe…
what blasted dictionary
I had to come home to bathe in your loveliest
of loveliest poetry

until a dream again stirs desire
and boredom compels to explore
to remember .........wonder f u l l l l l l