I AM

I am messenger,
I am conveyer of words,
And through my pen;
Delivering thoughts.
Of pasts,
Of mistakes made unwise,
Of hopes,
Of dreams;
and risky schemes.
I am messenger of writing pages long,
And that message gets told in many ways strong,
And at the end of the day
All I ask reader of mine,
That I have told the story accurately well.
So you see,
I am messenger,
I am conveyer of words,
And it is through my pen,
That I fulfill dreams.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: QLD

Favorite Poets: Flo Hart was a great Australian poet in her time and it is from Flo's influence that I first started to write poetry.

Comments

c lynn brooks

5 years 6 months ago

Francis

A bit choppy in my opinioon may I suggest either I or The as I am the(a) messenger to smooth the lines some otherwise I enjoyed reading this poem

Francis Cooper - Mac

5 years 6 months ago

Poem I Am

My main premise when I write a piece is that it has a beginning, a middle and an ending and it tells a story overall....Francis

Gracy

5 years 6 months ago

Hi Francis, I agree with Lynn

Hi Francis, I agree with Lynn, your poem is a bit choppy and many words can be tweaked so that you can write it with fewer lines. Otherwise, enjoyed.

scribbler

5 years 6 months ago

I

Think the choppiness might actually reflect how the thoughts might come when trying to describe ourselves

Simon

5 years 6 months ago

Hi,Lynn got it

Sometimes we write I a hurry and some of these little mistakes happens, well fulfillment is all we writers ever think of. Nice one

Leslie

1 year 9 months ago

Mac

I got it, good job and listen to Simon. We all must learn not to take things personally.