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Kammy O.
Kammy O.
May 26, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I am, He is, We are (Of me, my twin brother and my family)

I am fearless
Destined for greatness
Shining like the stars above
Accompanied by a dove

I am a beauty
With a kind heart and a duty
To teach the world and tell my stories
To brighten up faces
From a mile
With a smile

He is my handsome man
My number one fan
Who followed me
With a purpose to see
What a wonderful world it'd be
With laughter, joy and amazing beats

We are a family
One-stop-junction for comedy
In the midst of quarrels and fights
We make our worries light

My siblings and I giggle a lot
In happiness we find a fort
All that we cherish is within us
I love you loads like God does

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Enugu, Nigeria

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

3 years 1 month ago

I really like...

the way you extol the family's interaction and that you are so comfortable with them. The piece itself is one of joy and harmony, even as you say that there are disagreements and differences of opinion. Only thing I see to change is the word
[shining] spelling. Nice job Kammie. ~ Geezer.
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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years 1 month ago

dear kammy,

hello again, it is always nice to see you!

in this line:
He is (my) handsome man I would trade (my) for (a) or(one) because (my indicates lovers)

my favorite lines are:
He is (my) handsome man
My number one fan
Who followed me
With a purpose to see
What a wonderful world it'd be
With laughter, joy and amazing beats

excellent work!!!

*hugs, Cat

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