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Mar 29, 2021
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I Believed In Something Too Quickly(random Challenge @1)
I believed In Something Too Quickly
Never but never believe in love to quickly
the let down hurts
in the words of Cat Stevens "love hurts,love, scars,love wounds and mars"
I'm sure it does
so why do I keep believing in love?
Well there is always a tomorrow
to look to
always hope
that the one special person
will come along
I still believe
I still have hope
my journey is not at end
call me a fool if you will
then a fool I will be
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Pauls challenge I like this idea
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 3 months ago
Sometimes...
love shows up in the most unexpected places, sometimes it sneaks up on you and before you know it; there it is, hugging you in a headlock! I have no doubt that it is sneaking up on lots of people right now! And you could be the next one! Great work and heartfelt truth! Nice job. Make sure you put it in the drop down so that you can collect your certificate if you want one for completing the challenge. ~ Geez.
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c lynn brooks
4 years 3 months ago
Gee
thank you ver much for your to kind comments btw what drop down
c lynn brooks
4 years 3 months ago
Teddy
thank you so muchI appreciate you reading and offering your input
Geezer
4 years 3 months ago
Forgot to mention...
Your first line needs another O in Too! ~ Geez.
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Lavender
4 years 3 months ago
I Believed in Something Too Quickly
Hi, Chrys,
"...call me a fool if you will, then a fool I will be." Hopeful. There's really no other way regarding love, is there? Very nice, indeedy!
Thank you!
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c lynn brooks
4 years 3 months ago
lavendar
Thank you . No I guess there isn't