I can dance

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You need to fix your punctuation.
I like the poem a lot, just hard to read because of the commas.
This is how it should appear:

Sometimes
I close my eyes
It's dizzying,
Feeling something
As pure.

It reminds me,
As much
As I want to,
I'm not dead.

I meet my maker,
Each time
I experience the headiness.

Now, do I sacrifice,
More?
To feel that moment
Once [again], . I changed the word [more], to again, to avoid the repetition of the word more.
.It is up to you if you want to keep it.

To what end?

My end?

~ Geez.
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