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I caught you

I caught you forever you deny true colors speak out as you run and hide you will get her I promise you this on everything I love and everything you'll miss

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Hope u liked it

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: CA

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Triskelion

Triskelion

3 years 9 months ago

Shawna?

How did you find me?

Just kidding. How about breaking this into lines?

Thomas