I Lost The Instructions to being a woman

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively communicates a narrative of abuse and fear, using clear and evocative language. However, there are areas where the poem could be improved.

Firstly, the poem could benefit from a more consistent rhythm or meter. The lines vary in length, which can disrupt the flow of the poem. Experimenting with syllable count or stress patterns might help to create a more rhythmic reading experience.

Secondly, the poem could use more imagery and metaphor. While the narrative is clear, the language is quite literal and straightforward. Using more figurative language could help to evoke the emotions of the poem more vividly.

Lastly, the title and opening line suggest that the poem will explore the concept of womanhood, but this theme isn't fully developed. The poem could delve deeper into the speaker's struggle with their identity as a woman, perhaps by exploring how the abuse they suffer distorts their understanding of what it means to be a woman.

In conclusion, while the poem effectively communicates a powerful narrative, it could be improved by refining the rhythm, incorporating more figurative language, and developing the theme of womanhood more fully.

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I hope this piece contains a lot of poetic liberty and is not an experience of your own, although your last few words hint that it is personal on some level. If it is, I'm so glad you have your poetry to help shed the hurt and anger, and heal going forward.
Lx

So sorry that you experienced this. So glad you made it away safely and could write about it.
Lx

Wow! Your poem really expresses a violent and terrible relationship. His instructions far exceeded
What was natural.
Sad poem, but very good
Oem!

I have re-read your poem a dozen of times. I find it exceptional! A unique take on lost instructions!

Congratulations on your winning the contest. Your poem gives a hint of why a battered woman stays. Good job!

Well done!
Lx

Wonderful job!

Hello Cat

This is a sensitive issue for many. Your adaptation pulls at the heart strings. It is very descriptive and relays it's intention with accuracy. Thank you for sharing.

Let me start by saying thank you for sharing your experience, for as traumatic as this was, your resilience shines through in poetry.

Excellent flow and rhyme on this. The title is grabbed my attention, one can feel the emotional pull of what must've been such a scary phase in your life.

Great work.
W

You lay bare the harrowing experience of abuse, crafting a narrative that is as heart breaking as it is courageous.

The title, suggests not only the confusion caused by trauma but also the stripping away of identity at the hands of another.
Your poem holds a mirror to the silence that surrounds abuse. It’s a brave piece, one that deserves recognition for its unflinching portrayal of a reality too many endure in silence.

Congratulations on winning, so sorry you had to go through this agonising experience. Hope you are well, take care. Much love and thank you for sharing. Ruby xxx :)

Congrats! You deserve it!